Issue Story Revision – Megan Dougherty

The first correction I made in my neighborhood issue article was to restructure my conclusion to better fit the inverted pyramid style. Instead of writing the conclusion like a summary of the whole the article, as I initially wrote it, it is now a concluding thought for one of the smaller details in the story. Then I went through and fixed any grammar, wording, and AP style errors. Most of these included making sure each quote began in a new paragraph, inserting commas, and changing some word choice for better clarity and detail.

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