Neighborhood Revision Outline

In order to revise my story I’m going to focus it more on the exclusion zone’s current state and its possible future outline by my sources. I have contacted the President of the Chamber of Commerce and use him as a second source in place of the less relevant man-on-the-street quote used in the original piece. Information that was somewhat unclear has been removed and partially replaced with more direct quotes.

I will also include a more comprehensive and streamlined explanation of the law itself focusing on the process used in excluding individuals and the differences between how it works as opposed to normal court procedures.

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